I would like to follow the title of this image Looking Outside The Square and venture into some more abstract work, but realize I have a lot to learn.
This is not a complaint about the ci score - I was very happy with the comments I received.
I would really like to know the main failings of this - other than its incomprehensibleness (is that a word ?)
I did spend considerable time on it - and would rather put it to better use if I can.