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cinquains

darkaliryn7_1
11/12/04 6:30 PM GMT
Okay, okay, I'm a copycat. I saw the haiku thread and I remembered I had a couple cinquains I'd written that I liked and thought, fine, I'll start another one. I for one don't care how many you post at once, I'd read them.

For those who don't know, a cinquain is a form of poetry that goes like this:

1 word: a subject
2words: describing/relating to above word
3words: describing/relating to first word
4words: describing/relating to first word
1word: renaming--another word for it

They don't really flow that well, but . . . it's an established form of poetry.

here go mine:

cat
green glances
lightly she meows
silky black, pearly white
Autumn

nintendo
zoned out
fingers go numb
technology blessedly dulls senses
otherworld
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And if there had been more of the world, They would have reached it. --Luis de Camoes

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