Hey. ...could you all read these lyrics to a song I'm currently writing and suggest any titles for it. ..right now I'm calling it "Tell Me" ..but I really don't like taht title. Thanks. Well here's the lyrics:
*edit* (okay, I just like completely revised this, and added a whole lot, so you might want to reread it)

So if I said
That I laid her head
On my shoulder.
Would that make me a man?

So if I said,
That I cleaned his feet
With my sweat.
Would that make me a disciple?

So if I said
That I was gay
and were different
Would that make me less of a man?

Or Queer?
Something to Fear?
The Truth is not near.
Look into the Mirror.
What do you see?
It's not me.

So if I said
I kissed her
On her lips
Would that make me more?
Perhaps Give me a Better Score
Make me less of a bore, Hardcore.

So if I said
I betrayed him
With a kiss,
Would that make me amiss?
Or blessed?

Or less
Of a mess
Maybe then he woud sanctify
the alibi
Until
The truth might spill

So if I pick up the Cross
Nail my flesh to the board for you
Would that be my loss?

And if I take my pills
That kill the pain
Would that make me the same?

So if I give in to temptation
Take the holy city
Will I recieve no pity?

And if I take the pain
Put down my cane
Would that make me the lame?

Or strange?
Or different?
Or the same

So if I told you
That I worshiped a god
That was not God
Would that make me less?

So if I told you
that I worshiped Budha
and not God
Would that make me less?

Of a Man?
Of the same?
Of a person?
Of a believer?

So if I lead a holocast
And fought against redemption
Would I deserve death?

And if I'm acused of raping a little tike
And I'm of the minority
Should I go down without a fight?

Without a trival?
As you rape me of my rights?
With all your might
It isn't right.

And If I called God Budha
Or Allah
Would I not be saved?

So if I wore a "towel" over my head
Or a Kippah
I Would not be saved?

So if I said.
That Jesus never was.
Would I be behead?
Or if I said
That Jesus never died.
Would I be cruxifed?

And if I worshiped the sun
And gave praise to the moon
Would I burn in Hell?
Or just dispell?


If I asked you to cleanse the blood from my hands
Would you wash away my sins?
If I asked you to undo all the deaths
Would my will be done?
And If I never drank the Blood
Of your only Son
Would I be undone.

Wipe away the sins
Of the men
Wash away the blood
Of your kin
Wipe away the sweat
From your skin

I can't see you through this glass
I can't see you in this mass.

Wipe the blood from the Mirror
It will become much clearer
Who you are.
And what I am.
The reflections of my soul
That you stole
Become clearer
Time to throw away the Mirror.
Time to see who you are.


And So if I said to God
Take me
Heal me
Feel me
Love me
Hear me
I'm beginning to see you
But did not take the bread.
Would I not be saved?

What if I believe
In Peace and Love
And that there is a presence
That guides us. And hears us. And loves us.
Would I be healed?

And if I pissed on the garden of Eden
And ate some fruit
Would you damn a whole race of people?

But what if I followed your everyword.
And I praised you one day each week.
What happens to the rest of people?
What happens to the people whom call you Allah
Will they rot? And Die?

Or are you who I think you are?


Thanks.