I think it's a good thing those models are in silhouette...they look like they might be dressed down for the heat that's coming from that sunset? Anyway, they were part of the reason I was drawn into this one.
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon
G'day Brett,
The colours of that sky are really interesting and the "dome" effect works great with the simplicity of the composition. I think the presence of the models is a good idea though I'm not sure their potential for balance has been maximised, then again, having never worked with models, what the hell would I know? :) I'd opt for less dark foreground but perhaps you were limited in choices by the original photo.
Cool shot.
Mikel.