Hey Kalie,
Very nice portrait, I love the use of B&W in here, it suits your subject perfectly, (~8
Inspiring eyes, in my opinion, the key to great 'face' portraits,
One thing that I think could be improved is that hard line that separates her chin from her neck,
As far as I can see, it is created by shadows, so by reflecting the light coming from above, you could easily eliminate those shadows and have a more appealing portrait, (~8
As a reflector, a white paper will do,
Apart from that, congrats on a wonderful image, and a lovely model, 8~)
Nicely done,
I'm with Tim, I think this is a really good portrait. I particularly like the way you've defied convention and cut the face into the frame. It makes for something different and really emphasises her skin tone.