Saw this girl sitting on the wall in Vienna, Austria - unfortunately I was a long way off so its slightly blurry but I was more annoyed at missing a bit of the curved wall.
You described the process of creating your remarkable shots, Ray. This one is very different from your recent postings, but the composition is remarkable as is your sense of timing.
I agree with you about cutting off a bit of the wall, but I can live with it. The shot is focused well enough for my old eyes. If you made this into a wall sized poster, the focus might become a problem; but I don't think you have that in your plans although I could be wrong. The lighting is superlative and adds a good deal of depth to the shot which is no easy fete when shooting from distance. I would change one thing. Dead center in the shot is some sort of intensely white spot which I would clone out.
Roger
P.S. I would call this constructive and informative commentary.