I really like this shot, perhaps because I love to read! It really drew me in though, and I couldn't wait to zoom in to see what the page said ;-)
Quiet
Hello Taylor, this is so different than everything posted here on Caedes. And it is very, very good and a clever composition!
It has that classical character found in old b/w movies.
I have two ideas to improve this composition.
1 - get rid of the text Explore, it is only annoing.
2 - this image draws attention and makes us curious: what else is in that room, who can it belong to. So it might do the composition credit if you show a little bit more of the room (a piece of the desk, chair and maybe a window). That would increase the mystery you caught so wonderfully in this great peace of art.
So, I'll give it an 9, and hope that you will post another one to work on that 10!
Paul
I really like th black and white, it keeps it simple and straight forward. i dont think color would have had nearly the same affect. i really like how you have the pages turning. the entire image is so sharp and crisp, very well focused. it looks like an add, or something along those lines. great work! ~abby
Quiet