Hmm I look at it a little differently. I see it as a piece of metal about to be cut out, and in that context it's artistic. Makes a nice, undistracting desktop... but I'd love to see one in a dark green. It definitely has a focal point, and the subtle webbing is neat. Good job.
I think this work needs to become the icon associated with the Caedes name in the supper left hand corner on the website. Twark's got talent in spite of the simplistic appearance.