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Uploaded: 06/27/11 2:01 PM GMT
Mountain road
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This work by Floris de Lange is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported Licence.

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::Chipola1972
06/28/11 4:30 PM GMT
I think a bit more road, less sky. I DO like the "emptiness" of the image, as well as the muted colors. It makes a statement about being alone.

I would also like it to be larger (selfish) so I could use it as a desktop on my larger monitor.
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::Homtail
07/05/11 4:24 PM GMT
For me i feel that the photo is a little too empty. There is nothing for me eye to focus on except the little buggy in the middle. The road provides nice perspective into the shot but then there is nothing else. Emptiness is good but i feel it needs a little something extra like a bird or a tree to provide a little more subject matter. Only personal preference though.
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::coram9
07/05/11 8:37 PM GMT
Like - the shape of the curve in the road. I would crop the top half of the picture completely, the bland sky adds nothing and takes away so much. The buggy is too far away to be a subject, perhaps if it was closer and gave the viewer that to focus on before their eye is drawn away by the empty road to the mountains would work better. Sometimes you need an object like that to create an emptiness.
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