Not sure why this gets a CI of 60, but perhaps it is my taste. The picture needs leveling and I find it a little crowded, just an ordinary snapshot really. The colour thingy that you refer to is a clever idea and gives the picture some credibility, but a picture with a whole car in it would give more impact to the effect. Your other pictures are much better and with a better photograph to start with this would be better. (Tell your dad).

Looks like a fog related chain reaction collision from here. Needs a different angle to get the effect you are looking for.

I like it, but I do agree that maybe a diff car or angle might make it feel a bit better--perhaps the car thats centered there?