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Uploaded: 10/07/09 12:04 AM GMT
Missing You
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This is my very first still life I hope ya'll like it. Let me know what you think,if there's anything that could make it better. I'd appreciate any advice.

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.pastureyes
10/07/09 1:12 AM GMT
Hi Marieny, What the heck are you doing here? Are you trying to make still Life look easy! Well I think you have a great imagination and you did a splendid job. The only thing I may have done different is just a tad less sepia, and I would of taken the bumps out of the wall. I hope you will continue to produce great work like this, or else I might be missing you! :) Moose
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::Jimbobedsel
10/07/09 2:10 AM GMT
Beautiful work.
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.Jhihmoac
10/07/09 11:02 AM GMT
Personally, I'd leave the wall just as it is...It adds to the Victorian/Antique flair of everything else...Nice job...and faved...
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.Nukeman
10/07/09 3:30 PM GMT
Very nicely done. Keep up the great work.
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.mimifly
10/22/09 6:37 PM GMT
just love this.....
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::Flmngseabass
10/06/10 8:46 PM GMT
Very nice!!
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::Silvanus
01/22/11 3:10 PM GMT
A very nice still life, Marieny, artfully composed. I love the symbolism and the lightly crumpled piece of paper. The indoor lighting gives the image a sepia tone, but it also brings out the burnished brass color in the antique phone, which is very nice. One small and easy correction you might make would be to straighten the image. It leans a little to the right. Nonetheless, a beautiful photo!

- Steve
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::gandarva
02/21/11 9:29 PM GMT
Excellent photo Marieny! Sharp, like the colors and clear of noise! Looks very professional! Thank you! Allen
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::tee
02/21/11 10:42 PM GMT
I like it - you did quite well for a first attempt. The only thing that I can see that I would change is the wine glass. It's too modern against the rest of the pieces in the image. An older one - maybe cut glass or with some etching or silver trim would have tied into the shot a bit better. Oh - and just a tiny bit of straightening. Regardless, you did a great job -
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