This is my very first still life I hope ya'll like it. Let me know what you think,if there's anything that could make it better. I'd appreciate any advice.
Hi Marieny, What the heck are you doing here? Are you trying to make still Life look easy! Well I think you have a great imagination and you did a splendid job. The only thing I may have done different is just a tad less sepia, and I would of taken the bumps out of the wall. I hope you will continue to produce great work like this, or else I might be missing you! :) Moose
A very nice still life, Marieny, artfully composed. I love the symbolism and the lightly crumpled piece of paper. The indoor lighting gives the image a sepia tone, but it also brings out the burnished brass color in the antique phone, which is very nice. One small and easy correction you might make would be to straighten the image. It leans a little to the right. Nonetheless, a beautiful photo!
I like it - you did quite well for a first attempt. The only thing that I can see that I would change is the wine glass. It's too modern against the rest of the pieces in the image. An older one - maybe cut glass or with some etching or silver trim would have tied into the shot a bit better. Oh - and just a tiny bit of straightening. Regardless, you did a great job -