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Uploaded: 10/20/09 1:43 AM GMT
lone window
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I hope ya'll enjoy it. ;)

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.Vivianne
10/22/09 2:27 PM GMT
Very nice in black and white.
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::sharonva
10/23/09 1:27 AM GMT
I like this one a lot. The B&W format allows the viewer to focus on the lines of the picture and less on color. I wish I understood what that squiggle at the left was.... an electrical line?
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"The lyf so short, the craft so long to lerne, Thassay so hard, so sharp the conquering..." Chaucer
::seanbnd
10/23/09 2:21 AM GMT
Very nice picture, I like how you made the picture black and white. Allows you to focus more on the sharp lines of the window bars.
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"When good things are unraveling the bad things come undone"
.tiffani_2011
10/23/09 3:40 PM GMT
love it i really like the choice in setting.
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.notredame8
10/23/09 9:29 PM GMT
nice window
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.coram9
10/24/09 11:53 AM GMT
I am going to step out a little here. The main subject, the window with bars is good. I like the reflections of the bars in the glass, and the vague view of the interior. I like how two worlds merge in the glass, a sort of shot I also use. But, to be honest the surroundings just kill this image for me. The top right is a mess. The plants not so bad, but why? I do not see that they add to the image, and of course, the bit of mess on the wall, well that cannot be helped and should be left in, but the pipe work? no. A crop tighter on the window to remove the extraneous surroundings is a little tight with regard to the window, but you need to keep the angle on the window which is good. An alternative would be to go right into the window itself.

I am probably going on a bit here, but I like your work and I am trying to be constructive. If you want me to stop I will.
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