Never rebuke while you’re still indignant about a fault committed—wait until the next day, or even longer. Then calmly, and with a purer intention, make your reprimand. You’ll gain more by a friendly word than by a three-hour quarrel.
-Josemaria Escriva
I'm assuming that you added the sun's rays -- very well done. I especially like the colors, deep and warming reds and cool enchanting blues. Nice work - keep it up!
I like it - but - there is too much detail sacrifice and it still looks like a photo to me. Keep working - you'll get the effect your looking for - your close!