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Uploaded: 12/08/10 1:33 AM GMT
Precious Moments
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Picture of my favorite "cutie"! I had a little bit of trouble with the focus- it's hard to keep them still for very long!! Comments are encouraged!!!

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.snapshooter87
12/09/10 1:59 PM GMT
Kids are always cute. This can be better with even more cropping.
Half the distance from the right border to the subject, and the same at the bottom.
Crop the top border down to where just a small slice of the white roof is showing in the background.
Also, where her head meets the grey/cement building, her hair blends with some dark substance on the building, and makes her head appear misshapen .
A little cloning of the cement will correct this easily, and put maximum attention on the child.
It's well worth the touch up, Danielle.
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::LynEve
12/10/10 12:05 AM GMT
A nicely unposed picture of a precious little girl.
Nice to see some good expert advice above which I am sure others will benefit from as well.
I like the softer focus as it gives a dreamy look to the picture.

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.quickshot
12/11/10 1:02 AM GMT
I would listen to "snapshooter87". That guy really knows his stuff. I'm only beginning to understand the intricacies of composition from him. He has an intuition and vast knowledge. To me the shot looks great.

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.CollegeKid21
12/13/10 5:36 PM GMT
She's a cutie!
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