I like this shot a lot. I would have liked to see it on a larger canvas. Maybe as a seperate image on a coloured background so that the image would still be as good on the desk top. Good try.
What a beautiful flower, and the contrast in colors between the flower and the greenery really gives it punch. Shame about the low-resolution. It would be dramatic larger. I believe your camera auto-focused about an inch or two past the flower, and left us a rather blurry image.