I agree with you that the reeds and the flowers are very attractive. I do think that tightening in a bit more on an individual flower/reed combination might bring your point home in a more definitive way.
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon
A nice subject!! The overall pick is in need of some work though I'm afraid. The horizontal line is askew, some blur exudes and it has kind of a washed-out feel--maybe a drop in the gamma and some post work overall in a photo editor?? Or maybe, just maybe...take off you shoes, hike up the pant legs and wade out there to get a more close-up or macro of the pretty purple flowerings that are poppin'!?!? Keep'em coming as we always wanna see more!!
Auline