Better.. but i would even go further and crop out the people on the right and up to the roof of the first part of the building on the left, that way its more focus on the great reflections.. just my preference..
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind;
This looks like a lakefront community, or maybe it is on a canal. I think one of the uses of the panorama view is to convey a wider understanding of the area; so for that use I rather like the figure on the right left in. I might prefer that he/she be fishing but sometimes you take what you can get. The reflections are beautiful, but the entire scene contains interest from side to side. This is a very appealing picture.
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