None of the ideas expressed above are actually mine. They are told to me by Luthor and Ferdinand, the five inch tall space aliens who live under my desk. In return for these ideas, I have given them permission to eat any dust bunnies they may find under there.
I like the framing, and it's a terrific sunset. A shot of the sky like this wouldn't be my first choice as an HDR but I think you pulled it off. I think it needs a little more interest... but the panoramic format makes sure it has lots of class, and the colours are lovely.