Urmmmm this is a good attempt.... you got the shutter right but its a very messy image :( sorry to be harsh but it should be nice and crisp ) what camera are you using ? *EDIT* ive just been looking at your gallery and no other picture is as messy as this ! something happened to your cam or have you been playing ?
I have to agree with Ian and I too checked your gallery and note the same. I took a picture like this only after I dropped my camera in the water..
Keeponclick'n, you'll get it right..