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Uploaded: 07/18/07 2:43 AM GMT
Neon
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car i drew n took a pic of it then edited it in ps n photofiltre

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.kramden11
07/20/07 7:50 PM GMT
hmmm...not sure how I feel about this....
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.longbow_ga
07/20/07 11:09 PM GMT
I definitely like the idea and think you should do a series of them, though the perspective looks slightly wrong, but grweat idea. Thanks for sharing.
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.cewsmoke
07/21/07 2:00 AM GMT
Okay, I have a variety of feelings about this image, but I'm completely unqualified to impart them. So, I'll subject you to them anyways for my own sick amusement. Take EVERYTHING I say with a grain of salt as I am certainly no artist.

First, the idea is provacative and offers some great eye-candy. However, if you are interested in a total n00bs point of view here it goes. In an image like this I think you would be best served by keeping the placement of your subject in mind. In this case the rule of thirds would do quite a bit for you. By centering the car at a third to the right and then perhaps placing a secondary subject, like say a real rough outline done in the neon feel of a girl or guy next to the vehicle would be one possibility of many. When all you have is a subject in your image it is hard for the image to draw a viewer's eyes into your work. So, by offsetting the main subject and adding another small variable in your blank area you can help create more than just a really cool picture of a car. You can have a real kinetic piece of art that helps to capture your audience.

Now, don't be discouraged and I deeply apologize if I said anything that bothers or offends you. You've got a great piece here and I see no reason why you could not continue this type of work and really develop it into something special.

Keep up the good work!
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