the composition is nicely balanced. while I would've preferred them a bit more vivid, the softeness of the yellow of the petals works here. that being said, something this close needs to be in perfect focus, since so much attention is drawn to it. perhaps a tripod, and manual focus might've aided that a bit.
Please, even if you don't visit my gallery, check out my "Faves".I've left them intact since day "1", and would like it if every image there got the attention they deserved.
Joanie