This is a really creative image. The colors of the headphones combined with what seems like your use of a wide aperture firmly isolate the subject from all image clutter. The out-of-focus background reinforces the subject even more. Now. Delete this image and re-shoot it with the subject in focus. That's the one big flaw in your image, and it's a whopper.
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon