We don’t make art to show someone what something looks like. All this requires is eyes (or a lens). Art is supposed to have meaning, emotion, power, or magic. Alan & Mario "FourThirds"
It's a very good attempt and can produce much more impact with some cropping, contrast, a bit of saturation and sharpening. The subject is primarily the pistils/stamens and a tighter crop from top and right puts more emphasis on this area. The rest gives it much more punch and dramatically shows the sharp specks of pollen covering everything. You do have much more here than you're showing.