not focused and above all things over exposed, even though i might guess whhy you did it this way since at the end it is true at the end it gives a nice effect , i mean special colors(i like pastel colors, not sure of the term, i mean the opposite of saturated) try different lightening( more or less clarity) and try playing with softwares for retouching photos, it might be good or really good next time, since the composition is nice, hope you an understand my pretty poor english and that you won t be upset by my comment at all

Sorry the there is no focal point, very much over exposed, has potential, lil editing, could make it a lil better

I actually think this shot is totally artistic! I don't know exactly what a focal point is, but the blurry foreground flowers is quite interesting.. if maybe you could create another layer with photoshop and sharpen the branches to the left-lower-center. It's very pretty! And the composition is great ^^

Amazing Photograph.

RG