i think it's brilliant. i love the way the eye is looking upwards, as though it's trying to reach something. besides the creativity, it's also a really well drawn sketch (also in my inexperienced opinion)
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon