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Uploaded: 11/10/07 12:00 AM GMT
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picture of my brother's little family on the beach in california. please comment and tell me what you think, give me advice, anything...

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::casperkate
11/10/07 2:28 AM GMT
Very nice idea...much more imaginitive than the typical 'Family Portrait', well done.
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::phasmid
11/10/07 3:46 AM GMT
This leaves me with the thought that the future is closer than we think. I like your arrangement here, although I think that the little boy should be more in focus. Perhaps a shot a little further away with a good DOF then cropped in a bit would make a difference. I guess what I'm trying to say is that all three of them need to be clearly seen in this arrangement, and the boy is just a touch too soft.

The rest of the composition with the water and the arrangement you took of the rocks is really good.

♫ 005 PJ ♫

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.Joanie
11/13/07 1:07 AM GMT
Great capture! I think it could use alittle sharpening, but other than that its great. :)
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.Leahcim_62
11/13/07 4:22 AM GMT
Unusual picture, looks like Mum got wet feet wading out to the rocks :) Only advice I could offer would be to bring up the contrast/colour of the rocks in photoshop as they seem a bit dark. Or if your feeling realy adventurous change the sky as it seems a little plain. Nice picture, good composition, I like the boys natural expression :-)
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.Gabbels
11/13/07 7:59 AM GMT
Very creative idea for a family portrait with a nice composition. All I can say is that it needs a little more contrast.

Gabrielle
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.CK1215
11/13/07 2:04 PM GMT
I think, the photo is to fuzzy, needs to be focused , other than that great shot.
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