really nice job...kinda wish airplanes looked like that today :'( but really nice job otherwise...also...is it possible to get that rip in the water? like the water moving apart where the plane is flying over?
Very stylish. Personally I think the plane needs a little more detail, or texture, something to make it look more real. In many 3D images it wouldn't matter, but I think you want this one to be more convincing, rather than an obvious CGI render?
Aircraft trail ... very good. Overall balance in composition ... very, very good.
I do agree with the above though ... the dimensionality and texture, I believe more so, of the craft itself pales a little compared with the other elements. I did take a look at the other version and this is far, far superior.
The sense of motion that you have created is unreal, notwithstanding my previous words. Hmm, better clarify 'unreal' ... it is incredible. Your perspective heightens the feeling and effect.
Really nice work and this would work very well as a desktop.
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