Hope you don't mind me jumping in on your image's page here. 'Cause I had a thought..
Curious as to what the impact would be if you were to wait for the lamplight(s) to come on?
Or, barring that ... a shot earlier or later in the day?
Good composition. I like that you've used the leading lines of the path to set this one up.
Add in some other kind of lighting as opposed to the daylight captured here; lamp lights on for example ... lil' more drama, perhaps? Earlier/later in the day, same thing ... the lighting would really change things and start to bring out some more of the shapes, et al ... within frame.
Caveats?
Not too sure about the merger of the table and that of the frame on the right-hand side.
Again, going back to the idea of changing the lighting ... might work a bit better? With the same composition, more or less? As it is a tad prominent now, in terms of a focal point of sorts.
Watch your exposure/white balance, though. As the sky is starting to take on some strange colourations, at least on my monitor display.
That said, nice shot. Sincerely. I can tell that you put some aforethought before depressing the shutter button in composing your image here, and a tip of the hat to you for doing so.
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Had to stretch my fingers from all of the writing here before continuing, as they were starting to cramp.
Tanju