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::Piner
12/23/03 7:00 AM GMT
The last poetry thread is getting pretty long, maybe we should start another one.
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The work of art may have a moral effect, but to demand moral purpose from an artist is to make him ruin his work.
(Johann Wolfgang von Goethe - 1832)
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or maybe we could just let the poetry discussion die?
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okay that sig was messed up but its gone now so its all good
Well it won't die if you keep posting on it now will it???
:-)
:-)
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-Everyone is entitled to my opinion-
YOUR BEATING A DEAD HORSE!!!!!!!!!! hahah yea i was jking..but we really need a separate site for poetry....i mean what with all the aspireing young(and deathly old) poets we have hear at CAEDES.NET
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okay that sig was messed up but its gone now so its all good
Better post some poetry before "The Mad Limericker" strikes again...
Here is something short but sweet that I did. :c)
"When I"
When I see her smile, when I see her face;
When I hear her laugh, it sends me into space
When I hear her voice, when I see her grin;
When I look into her eyes, I want to fall right in
When I think of her, when I dream of My Light;
When I feel her touch, I want to hold her tight.
Here is something short but sweet that I did. :c)
"When I"
When I see her smile, when I see her face;
When I hear her laugh, it sends me into space
When I hear her voice, when I see her grin;
When I look into her eyes, I want to fall right in
When I think of her, when I dream of My Light;
When I feel her touch, I want to hold her tight.
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The work of art may have a moral effect, but to demand moral purpose from an artist is to make him ruin his work.
(Johann Wolfgang von Goethe - 1832)
NO MORE LOVE!!! COMMON I WANNA SEE SAD NESS!!! DISPAIR!!! YOUR MAKING ME....YOUR MAKING ME HAPPY!!!!!
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okay that sig was messed up but its gone now so its all good
Death and destruction
Disease and devastation
Despair and dejection
Where oh where would we be
Without the letter D
Disease and devastation
Despair and dejection
Where oh where would we be
Without the letter D
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"Success is getting what you like. Happiness is liking what you get." -anonymous
Hav'nt posted here recently, so this will make up for all fo those missing "Daily Doses of Doggy"
"War Again"
Indestructible
A long lost love
Ever shaking
My own white dove
What is peace?
What is War?
Knocking always
On my front door
I am America
Hear me cry
I slit my own wrist
And I lay down and Die
Forever here
Forever gone
Here to stay
Life in the non
War has scarred me
War is crime
War is murder
War is slime
"War Again"
Indestructible
A long lost love
Ever shaking
My own white dove
What is peace?
What is War?
Knocking always
On my front door
I am America
Hear me cry
I slit my own wrist
And I lay down and Die
Forever here
Forever gone
Here to stay
Life in the non
War has scarred me
War is crime
War is murder
War is slime
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- Jest Mi 2 Sense
Ok, Lets talk about war then....
"Last Man Standing"
Walking through a nuclear Hell,
Stepping over human shells.
Holocaust all around
No one else left to make a sound.
The heat freezes your bones
The decimation leaves you all alone
Listen to your coffin wheeze,
Weak, you fall to your knees.
Fallout rotting your brain,
World's population laying slain.
The Reaper's work is almost done,
Hunting down you, the last one.
Feeling Death's touch, you leave it all behind,
The annihilation of Mankind.
"Last Man Standing"
Walking through a nuclear Hell,
Stepping over human shells.
Holocaust all around
No one else left to make a sound.
The heat freezes your bones
The decimation leaves you all alone
Listen to your coffin wheeze,
Weak, you fall to your knees.
Fallout rotting your brain,
World's population laying slain.
The Reaper's work is almost done,
Hunting down you, the last one.
Feeling Death's touch, you leave it all behind,
The annihilation of Mankind.
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The work of art may have a moral effect, but to demand moral purpose from an artist is to make him ruin his work.
(Johann Wolfgang von Goethe - 1832)
thanks..now i am in lament again...how it should be ^..^
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okay that sig was messed up but its gone now so its all good
Hey, I think the war poetry even scared off the limerrickers. Hehehehehe!!
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The work of art may have a moral effect, but to demand moral purpose from an artist is to make him ruin his work.
(Johann Wolfgang von Goethe - 1832)
Technical Difficulties
As I gazed into my face in the mirror,
I was horrified to find that all of its vitality, all of its life,
In essence, my very being,
Was drained out of me and that I was merely
The external portion, the frame.
I was still there, but it was like an old photograph: faded and worn.
Was it still me?
As a Christian,
I am taught to have complete faith in God.
But, at these times,
The lowest in some time,
Even God cannot comfort me.
I isolate myself from His power.
I want to fall into despair,
But when I try, it's empty.
There's nothing there.
I'm depressed. I'm worried. I'm scared.
Am I really crazy, as I've feared?
Alone. Alone. Alone.
This house is not my home.
As I gazed into my face in the mirror,
I was horrified to find that all of its vitality, all of its life,
In essence, my very being,
Was drained out of me and that I was merely
The external portion, the frame.
I was still there, but it was like an old photograph: faded and worn.
Was it still me?
As a Christian,
I am taught to have complete faith in God.
But, at these times,
The lowest in some time,
Even God cannot comfort me.
I isolate myself from His power.
I want to fall into despair,
But when I try, it's empty.
There's nothing there.
I'm depressed. I'm worried. I'm scared.
Am I really crazy, as I've feared?
Alone. Alone. Alone.
This house is not my home.
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wow, nice one Jessiac, heres a new one from the doggy for all ya'll to enjoy, or not enjoy, but who knows?
" I Lament For Existance"
"I Lament" (part 1 of 2)
No one expects the obvious
Only God can know the truth
I sit and cry and pray
For else would be uncouth
Destruction all around me
Can God protect me now?
If I were to die this instant
Could God defend me? How?
How can this "God" allow
Injustices and death
If God is the almighty
Will he be there in my last breath?
Because my breath is every breath,
Of the healthy and the sick
And because no one lives forever
Burned down has been our wick
"For Existence" (part 2 of 2)
We think ourselves immortal,
And we think ourselves as great
But we are not even a speck
On St. Peters' holy gate
Will this life we know burn out?
Since ten thousand years at most
Have we been on this planet
A four billion year old host
So the answer is "of course"
We'll run our path as planned
Our soul to meet our maker
Our body to meet the land
I Know now how our God
Can allow senseless despair
For we are just another raindrop
Fell on a desert bare
This is probably my favorite poem I've written to date, and I hope that all who read it will enjoy it as well...
" I Lament For Existance"
"I Lament" (part 1 of 2)
No one expects the obvious
Only God can know the truth
I sit and cry and pray
For else would be uncouth
Destruction all around me
Can God protect me now?
If I were to die this instant
Could God defend me? How?
How can this "God" allow
Injustices and death
If God is the almighty
Will he be there in my last breath?
Because my breath is every breath,
Of the healthy and the sick
And because no one lives forever
Burned down has been our wick
"For Existence" (part 2 of 2)
We think ourselves immortal,
And we think ourselves as great
But we are not even a speck
On St. Peters' holy gate
Will this life we know burn out?
Since ten thousand years at most
Have we been on this planet
A four billion year old host
So the answer is "of course"
We'll run our path as planned
Our soul to meet our maker
Our body to meet the land
I Know now how our God
Can allow senseless despair
For we are just another raindrop
Fell on a desert bare
This is probably my favorite poem I've written to date, and I hope that all who read it will enjoy it as well...
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- Jest Mi 2 Sense