Nice shot, but methinks if you would cropp it a bit so there is not so much grass in the foreground it would be better looking, in my humble opinion that is, nevertheless nice work:)
quite a bit going on here in this shot. I think what twinkel is trying to tell you is that the grass, while a pleasant feature to you for this shot, takes away from what she (and I too) suspect you were trying to show "us".
since you'd originally tried uploading this in the negative space contest, then try to recognize what properties of the image make it a good candidate, and what aspects may perhaps take away from that.
Please, even if you don't visit my gallery, check out my "Faves".I've left them intact since day "1", and would like it if every image there got the attention they deserved.
Being that ur a 10 year old little Girl I THINK THIS SHOT IS AWESOME FOR UR AGE. Thank u for sharing it with us. DONT take the corrective critism to heart. We all need a little help sometimes. THANK U Sweetie for sharing.