it's an interesting one, jon. you did a great job at giving it a futuristic/machine style, and chose everything very carefully. the spider looks a bit odd because it is flat while the sphere it is on is very 3-d; also the colors are too desaturated so it looks faded; since it seems that it is a light source, it should be highly saturated or else very white, not gray
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Are you sanctified in your
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I turn from a thief to a beggar
From a god to God save me
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