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Uploaded: 07/18/06 8:29 PM GMT
The Swan
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Did you too see it, drifting, all night on the black river? Did you see it in the morning, rising into the silvery air - An armful of white blossoms, A perfect commotion of silk and linen as it leaned into the bondage of its wings; a snowbank, a bank of lilies, Biting the air with its black beak? Did you hear it, fluting and whistling, A shrill dark music - like the rain pelting the trees - like a Knifing down the black ledges? And did you see it, finally, just under the clouds - A white cross Streaming across the sky. The Swan by Mary Oliver.

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::phasmid
07/18/06 8:55 PM GMT
Thanks for sharing the poetry of the picture and the words. Nicely done :)
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.photos_587
07/18/06 9:01 PM GMT
I don't use this one word often, but I have to here....OUTSTANDING.!

I especially like the contrast with the water and the swan, and the stillness of the water. It is in my favorites and on my desktop.

Thanks for sharing it.

Steve
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::Anita54
07/18/06 11:23 PM GMT
This is a real beauty and the poetry makes it even better. The coloring is really pretty going from the lighter blue to the darker almost black. Very nicely captured. Thanks. Anita
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.foofoo
07/18/06 11:40 PM GMT
Stunning photography Patti. It is just beautiful how the swan is silouhetted against the dark water making it appear to be a "heavenly " creature. I also like the reflections in the water.
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::kidder
07/18/06 11:51 PM GMT
Awesome Patti!! Especially when blown up to full screen!! Beautiful capture, & the white swan against the dark waters is super..not to mention the reflection! Into my favs. it goes my friend! Nice poem too; you have done yourself proud! :) ~Dan
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::katman
07/19/06 12:11 AM GMT
Another nice mood piece. Really superb work.
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::bfrank
07/19/06 12:29 AM GMT
You captured this in just the right way. The mood of the picture is poetry in itself but what a delight to include the poetry with it.
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Life's moments are sweet. I just want to capture all that I can of them.
::DigiCamMan
07/19/06 3:59 AM GMT
Very nice shot. That's worth a pint...go have one on me. You can bill me.
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.AmNeSiA
07/19/06 8:37 AM GMT
This is a great photograph of the swan and looks nice against the colour of the water. Great work
Jason
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scorpie
07/19/06 12:47 AM GMT
Oh, just love this one Fogz, so nice and peaceful.
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.tiganitos
07/19/06 3:06 PM GMT
you ve made any changes in this one ? anyway its beautiful i still haven't seen a swan in my life just born lol
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::gerryp
07/19/06 6:27 PM GMT
Good capture of this Swan Patti...really shows the gracefulness and serenity of swans...gerry..
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::Dehli
07/19/06 8:25 PM GMT
Very gracious and elegant... thanks!
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::madmaven
07/20/06 1:57 AM GMT
Well done, Patti! The softness...the colors...the poem.
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.akajohncastle
07/20/06 10:31 AM GMT
This is great. I love the almost dreamy Blue tone through the picture.

Andy.
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.Alexxandra
09/14/07 11:10 AM GMT
This is one of the best shots of a swan that I have ever seen!Congrats!
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