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alone she stands
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A whisper blew A lonely truth That once I was loved But now I'm alone... A lonely flower... comments appreciated. -Jenevive skygirl.

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::Ed1958
11/11/09 7:12 PM GMT
So charming, so pretty, so magic.
Ed.
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::Jimbobedsel
11/11/09 7:31 PM GMT
You not only know how to compose poetry, but a pictures as well. Very nice, and I love the sepia. It gives the shot a 30's or 40's look.

Jimbob
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.Genver
11/11/09 7:41 PM GMT
Nice picture of the plant,the effect is very good.
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.meiamafreak
11/11/09 8:02 PM GMT
...but surely She is never lonely!
As for the picture itself, very nice! I like the soft sepia and the building in the background somehow gives it a nice, old feel.
Thanks for sharing!
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AMAWFUDGENDARY!! My Gallery
.Caiden
11/11/09 8:34 PM GMT
Somewhat haunting, lonely, ethereal. Very nicely done. Keep it up!
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To take a photograph is to make a presentation of God's work. Do so Wisely. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~Christian Of Caedes~~
.Eubeen
11/11/09 9:23 PM GMT
A wonderful shot and prose Jenevive. Nicely composed and a lovely sepia effect.
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Imagine there were no hypothetical situations.
.raquel10
11/11/09 9:41 PM GMT
Beautiful, nostalgic... makes me a bit sad... but I like it. Nicely done.
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"Do you see any Teletubbies in here? Do you see a slender plastic tag clipped to my shirt with my name printed on it? Do you see a little Asian child with a blank expression on his face sitting outside on a mechanical helicopter that shakes when you put quarters in it? No? Well, that's what you see at a toy store. And you must think you're in a toy store, because you're here shopping for an infant named Jeb."
::0930_23
11/11/09 10:03 PM GMT
I feel like I am standing there gazing at the house where my love once lived. The soft focus comes from misty eyes. Good work Sky Girl.
The words are very as well.

TicK

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Hopefully my photos and stories will let you know what makes me Tick
.haCk_Inf3ction
11/11/09 11:03 PM GMT
nice great style
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HaCk Inf3cti0n
.brandondockery
11/12/09 1:14 AM GMT
Excellent!!
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toetsie
11/12/09 8:02 AM GMT
A beautiful photo!!!
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Carpe Diem.....Joost..
::PhotoSynthesis
11/12/09 4:51 PM GMT
I love the angle and alignment. Always been a fan of sepia coloring. Very nice
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.ptcappella
11/12/09 5:32 PM GMT
Fear not little flower...for spring shall return! Beautiful shot Jenevive.
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::coram9
11/14/09 9:55 AM GMT
The white building is quite obvious, making the flower too negative, almost like interest to a picture of the building, except that the building is blurred and obviously not the subject. You always make the viewer work to see the subject with your unorthodox compositions. So many opposites in this one, the dull flower, the light building, the flower off to one edge, uncoloured and not more central and obvious. I don't think you can really judge your work by the usual standard applied in Caedes, hence the low CI. Still, I like them.
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.mac39
11/17/09 11:31 PM GMT
I am partly with 'coram9' but also like this composition.

Mac
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.vlad421
11/24/09 1:21 AM GMT
Nice photo, but the poem is never true!
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.meiamafreak
11/27/09 4:47 AM GMT
^ agreed!
lol
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