You have a terrific design going here and the colors are marvelous together! If there was a way you could sharpen it though, it would kick it up a notch.
Woah this thing is a bit pyscadelic! I love the mixture of colours, makes me think of sweets but i agree with above. I think that a little more clarity is needed in the pattern. The blurriness detracts from what is actually a wonderful composition. Keep trying!
He who dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the almighty. I will say of the Lord, "He is my refuge and my fortress, my God in whom i trust". Psalm 91: 1 and 2