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Uploaded: 05/05/10 3:39 AM GMT
Butterfly Dreams of Being Free
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Firstly, I'd like to thank everyone for the fantastic comments and critiques on my previous submission. I really enjoy hearing what you think :)

This is the works of a collaboration between Nikoneer and myself. It started with my turquoise butterfly and Pen Tool work, but I felt it was missing something. I showed it to Nikoneer and he suggested adding some semi-transparent "fleeting" elements, I loved the idea but had no idea how to do it. So, I sent it to him and we came up with this, only after his other excellent idea of adding the smaller glowing butterflies. We hope you enjoy our combined efforts! Comments and critiques are most welcome and always appreciated. Thanks for looking! Lori

credits: Photoshop CS3 + CS4, butterfly outline design by free-stainedglass.com + Canvas 9.0

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::garrettparkinson
05/05/10 3:53 AM GMT
Your images always have such a clean look to them. Love
your color palette. Nicely done.

garrett
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.sahadk
05/05/10 6:20 AM GMT
What an amazing creation! incredible colors and great
job Lori! superb!!!
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::verenabloo
05/05/10 6:41 AM GMT
It seems the two seperate pieces of 'lace' are sewn together. Thats wonderful what you did with this. The colour is amazing. So very soft and gentle. I really like that this looks so much like silk. Thanx Lori, for yet another wonderful work of art. Verena
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The wisdom of life consists in the elimination of non-essentials.
::busybottle
05/05/10 7:20 AM GMT
Good grief Lori just amazing! semi-transparent "fleeting" elements was a great idea! Gives it some nice motion. The butterflies coming in from behind is just plain cute! Really a brilliant creation for the two of you!
Paul
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"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"
::Hottrockin
05/05/10 9:11 AM GMT
Very neat & interesting work!!
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Why do the pictures come out square when the lens is round??
.catweasel
05/05/10 9:55 AM GMT
Another exquisite and highly original piece, Lori.
I love the way you've included that steel-grey piping along with the more delicate lace, flowers and butterflies.
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"Where is the wisdom we have lost in knowledge? Where is the knowledge we have lost in information?" THOMAS STEARNS ELIOT
::casechaser
05/05/10 11:47 AM GMT
Beautiful reiteration of a constant theme.
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::trixxie17
05/05/10 5:17 PM GMT
Lovely conception and execution by both of you.
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::Inkeri
05/05/10 6:44 PM GMT
Amazing creation with Very Beautiful colors.
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::jswgpb
05/05/10 9:41 PM GMT
Very grand work Lori. It's a beauty for sure. Congrats to the both of you.......a wonderful collab.
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.Eubeen
05/05/10 10:30 PM GMT
An amazing creative image from the two of you. Wonderful design work and great job!
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It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see ~ Henry David Thoreau
.zunazet
05/05/10 10:39 PM GMT
You and Nikoneer make a great team. Bravo to you both for an outstanding post.
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::tigger3
05/05/10 11:17 PM GMT
Excellent teamwork on this unique and fantastic work of art.
♪ ♫ :)Sandi♪ =^..^=

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Nature in all her glory is my uplift on life and so is my love of photography. sandi ♪ ♫
.flanno2610
05/06/10 1:04 AM GMT
Great teamwork!
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.jcferg99
05/06/10 7:45 AM GMT
Splendid and unique. A wonderful collaboration.
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.icedancer
05/06/10 7:03 PM GMT
Well, between the two of you, you did a fabulous job and love the colours
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Happy May Everyone
::danika
05/07/10 9:09 PM GMT
Beautiful blues & I love the pleated pattern. The butterflies are a nice touch. Magnificent creation Lori.
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Flmngseabass
05/11/10 3:50 AM GMT
Now you've done it, you made me go and use this for my new desktop wallpaper!:):) Absolutely gorgeous work Lori.:):) I love that gray flexible bar running throughout the blue pattern!! Just magical!!!
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::assfarst
05/11/10 10:14 AM GMT
This is really killer Lori. The bar sets this apart from the ordinary. Faved, big time!
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.Jhihmoac
05/27/10 2:27 AM GMT
Kudos! Faved...
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.Digital_Angel
06/24/10 5:18 PM GMT
I like the concept of the image, and I think the fade suggestion was a good one.

I have one critique & a suggestion:

1. The gray/metal-y/embossed element distracts me from the softness of the rest of the image. I think that the hard, straight lines make for good contrast, but the addition of gray gradient and embossing takes away from the original image (that's the first thing I noticed in the thumbnail); I think part of the reason is because there's already a fairly thick stroke/outlining on the butterfly image. I would suggest either getting rid of it or changing the layer style (something simpler, like a plain color w/o embossing)

2. What if you made the BG yellow or orange (or some contrasting color)? I think that would enhance the opacity/fade effect and make it pop out more instead of the blue fading to gray.

Anyway, just my suggestions :)
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