Robert, although your 'narrative' says nothing to me, it's a nice B&W image, showing us a piece of the daily life. I assume this image is captured somewhere in Canada.
Regards, Cornelius
"Life is short, break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably, and never regret anything that made you smile" .... mygallery
Actually the noise in the sky doesn’t bother me, it’s what I would expect to see from a scanned neg. The lean of the church bothers me though. Otherwise it’s a very pleasant and competently presented photo. It’s also a nice surprise to find someone using film in this digital age.
Regards, Cornelius