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Uploaded: 12/15/10 5:04 AM GMT
Shallow Creek (Rework)
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As suggested by my friends (Cornelius, Lyn, Jimbob, Sandi) I have cropped the image, edited in photoshop the overexposed areas using "Shadows/Highlights" and Gamma correction and also did a bit of cloning on the grass. I think it looks definitely better now. Thanks, my friends - this is just the kind of critique I appreciate very much.

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.sahadk
12/15/10 5:22 AM GMT
Yes,this one looks better and you did a wonderful job.
Nice work.
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::0930_23
12/15/10 6:08 AM GMT
They steered you right Raj. It looks good. All I know is the warmth in both posts were a welcome sight.

† Merry Christmas †


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Cameras are like people--sometimes they lose focus.
.koca
12/15/10 11:00 AM GMT
I liked the original one, too. But, this is also a nice work.
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::LynEve
12/15/10 11:09 AM GMT
You did a great job with it Raj.
Such a beautiful scene.
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::corngrowth
12/15/10 1:02 PM GMT
Perfect rework, Raj! Glad you showed us that being open for honest and constructive critique only leads to enhancement.
Regards, Cornelius.
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::Jimbobedsel
12/15/10 3:06 PM GMT
Congrats on a great job reworking your shot, Raj. Just getting rid of the overexposed area, seem to give an overall contrast boost to the entire frame. Very nice.
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::cynlee
12/15/10 4:26 PM GMT
A good attitude, Raj. Whenever people really told me what they thought, helped me turn out a better shot next time. I just looked at the other and I see how your changes have improved this fine vacation spot to make it better technically and more appealing. Well done!
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::Genver
12/15/10 7:44 PM GMT
This version looks very good,Raj,the other one is very lovely too.
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.Catharina1
12/15/10 8:05 PM GMT
Wonderful rework Raj.. like this the composition is more powerful. But this (original) good photo already has been a very good start! Have a wonderful evening! Mich
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::Inkeri
12/15/10 9:20 PM GMT
Beautiful rework,Raj.A Very Beautiful scene.
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::tigger3
12/16/10 3:05 AM GMT
Raj, Very well done on the rework, thanks for giving it the effort. =^..^=Tigs
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Logun7
12/16/10 9:24 PM GMT
Great job on the rework:)
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