I really like the placement of the subject, the bokeh, the fabricated(?) rain, the colors, and the filter you used, but I did crop a little off the top so the ratio would fit my laptop screen a little better. If I was going to have to lose a little of this beauty I was going to decide what part to lose. Thanks, Frank. I see you're just about the same age as me, which goes a log way to explaining the "flower power" styling of some of your work... I grew up during the same time and probably the same way.
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