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my dreams are the sun............
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See that golden hue Burning in the west My dreams are with that color My dreams are the sun The sun always sets But never seems to rise That sun carries my dreams Slowly out of my reach I watch it slide away Leaving me behind The color disappears My dreams are with that sun Whenever the sun sets It rises in another place A place blessed by that light My dreams are hidden in that light At my window seat I watch the sun take it all away My dreams are with the sun My dreams are the sun .......poem by Dawn Michelle

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::scorpie
10/05/07 11:19 PM GMT
So lovely fogz.
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Why not go out on a limb, that is where the fruit is.... Frank Scully
::razorjack51
10/05/07 11:29 PM GMT
Wonderful coppery tones and glow to this one Patti! Beautiful poem too! Great work, my dear friend. =)
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.Tomeast
10/05/07 11:43 PM GMT
Wonderful yes.
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.0930_23
10/06/07 12:08 AM GMT
What lovely pictures and words. They seem to intertwine. I can almost hear the waves loppin' against the shore. Very nice post.

Tick
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I'll meet you at the edge of the sunlight, just behind the shadows. The Ghost
.Joanie
10/06/07 1:33 AM GMT
The sun on the water seems very magical! With it peaking thru the cloud even makes it more lovely. Great work Patti! :) :)
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Life is the pits sometimes, but God and your friends are always there to help you through it.
.RenieRenee
10/06/07 1:58 AM GMT
Oh My...very lovely indeed. You have such a wonderful talent, you must be very happy with your work.
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You live Life in Chapters - Try to end each Chapter HAPPY!
.photos_587
10/06/07 2:19 AM GMT
another outstanding photograph, Ms Patti. Love it, right into my favorites. ;-)
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My 'puter crashed the other day so I'm trying to get my new one up and running. ;-( This new OS (Vista) is going to take some getting used to. Sorry I haven't been commenting as much as I would like to. ;-) Steve
.Fergus
10/06/07 2:31 AM GMT
Just perfect.
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"What doesn't kill us makes us stronger" - Friedrich Nietzsche
.21citrouilles
10/06/07 3:03 AM GMT
This is wow! May I commend you on the excellence of your waterscapes...Thank you for sharing such beauty. :) + faves
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::ironjoe
10/06/07 3:25 AM GMT
Words and image.. wonderful, Patti.
Joe
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In wine there is truth!
::casechaser
10/06/07 3:53 AM GMT
It's like a marriage of sea and sky. A beautiful presentation!
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Photographs taken with an Olympus C-5050. If you have some extra time, please visit my gallery
::Dunstickin
10/06/07 7:09 AM GMT
This has gotta be one of your best best Patti!...you have given us a lot of beauties in the past!..but this!!!!! Oh Bloody WOW!

just totally gobsmacked!....Gonna have to give you a 'foofy' number 001 if it ain't taken!!!! cos you are number one!
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*You will have noticed that I haven't been commenting as much on your fine images!..This is because of the pains in my hands!..the constant use of the keyboard, makes this difficult..so, my dear friends..I can only apologise to you all in advance!* Dunstickin's Gallery
.corngrowth
10/06/07 7:32 AM GMT
Wonderful Patti. Regards, Cornelius
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Cornelius was here! (lol) Click HERE to see his work!
::tiganitos
10/06/07 8:17 AM GMT
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life is a movie that has no genre
::tiganitos
10/06/07 8:18 AM GMT
you can't comment on this, there are no words
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life is a movie that has no genre
::Shewolfe
10/06/07 11:45 AM GMT
Stunning capture!
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Crazy doesn't even begin to cover it.. My signatures, wallpapers, avatars and other graphics can be found HERE
::Hottrockin
10/06/07 11:53 AM GMT
Oo-la-la!! Sensuously seductive scene!! Romance is in the air!!

~winks~

How you doin?? *~P
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Why do the pictures come out square when the lens is round?? Picture Purrrfect .
.SEFA
10/06/07 11:59 AM GMT
So very, very beautiful! Wonderful shot!
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SEFA
.Inkeri
10/06/07 12:11 AM GMT
So Beautiful and so Stunning..Love it
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.dark_lord_fez
10/06/07 1:18 PM GMT
great shot! well done.
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::snapdragonk
10/06/07 1:33 PM GMT
So incredibly, awesomely breathtaking. You don't often see sunsets in portrait but it works perfectly here. I love the warm colours and the beautiful verse too. You're a star Patti:)
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::nigelmoore
10/06/07 2:18 PM GMT
Another superb one Patti. This looks as though it's been etched on copper. It's almost like that reflection in the water continues on through the sky and up to the sun. Congratulations my friend, I salute your instinct for the right angle and the best moment. Again!
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"Whatever you're interested in, go for it. You can only find your voice if you're not intimidated by doing stuff that's been done before." Alec Soth
::krt
10/06/07 2:49 PM GMT
Perfect. Is it possible to give "11" in the VB?
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::phasmid
10/06/07 3:20 PM GMT
I have to agree with all those comments I just read. They're all positive and positively right. I love the poem; it gives this beauty even more polish and panache!!

♫ :)PJ ♪

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"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon
.s0050463
10/06/07 5:03 PM GMT
just a wonderful fantastic shot, great lovely poem too! I just love it , I think there are no more words needed on this fabulous image!
Nick
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Please visit my gallery.
.89037
10/06/07 6:08 PM GMT
Fabulous image,indeed! ..the colours and lighting are so WONDERFUL..!!!
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Adriana....:)
::spoton
10/06/07 6:45 PM GMT
Needs to be on a wall and framed. Excellent work.
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Charlie
::tee
10/06/07 10:49 PM GMT
I look towards the sun as it sets and reflect upon my life. It's been a good life - no regrets - though I've had my share of strife. When my time comes and my sun settles low I only have one wish. That the final image my eyes see is as beautiful as this -

teeveee
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So many pics and so little time can mean just one thing - it must be - tee time
::gerryp
10/07/07 8:05 AM GMT
WOW you have one of better sunset I ahve ever seen here Patti...Brilliant work...thanks for sharing...gerry
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"The more we come in contact with animals, and observe their behaviour, the more we love them, for we see how great is their care for their young." - philosopher Immanuel Kant
.paul1972
10/07/07 9:06 PM GMT
Sunsets are what inspired me to take up digital photography nearly 2 years ago, hoping that one day I would be taking shots like this, This is simply stunning Patti, I love the half covered sun and the reflection on the water. Your best is getting better!!!

Paul :)
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Drink triple, see double, act single!!!
::sasraku
10/10/07 8:55 AM GMT
Just stunning my friend, wonderful image indeed.

Regards,

Mark.
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::whttiger25
10/10/07 2:33 PM GMT
What's not to love about this one? The sun peeking beneath the clouds is a great affect, as is the reflection of the sun over the water. Into my favorites!
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.Blumie
10/10/07 6:09 PM GMT
Just awesome. I have to put this into my favs!
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I would be happy, seeing you in my galerie. Today I've posted Styrian Farm
.boremachine
10/11/07 4:36 PM GMT
this is ooooh sooo lovely ;o)
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If you have some minutes why don't you come visiting my gallery ?
::biffobear
10/12/07 6:38 PM GMT
What Reservoir in Glossop is this then Patti ?..Unusually full when i passed through on Monday..Really lovely shot this,the only comment other than that is ..I wish it was 1600x1200...Richie.
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::cirquegoddess
10/14/07 8:45 PM GMT
Beautiful image and poem to go with it. Very timeless.
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"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius & it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, then I'm really better than them."--Marilyn Monroe
.Corconia
10/15/07 6:41 AM GMT
Visiting your gallery this one caught my eye. Great shot. I have added to my favs!
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'Man as an individual is an unsolvable puzzle but in the aggregrate is a mathemaical certainty' Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Why not visit my Gallery.
.Corconia
10/15/07 6:42 AM GMT
Visiting your gallery this one caught my eye. Great shot. I have added to my favs!
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'Man as an individual is an unsolvable puzzle but in the aggregrate is a mathemaical certainty' Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Why not visit my Gallery.
.Corconia
10/15/07 6:43 AM GMT
Visiting your gallery this one caught my eye. Great shot. I have added to my favs!
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'Man as an individual is an unsolvable puzzle but in the aggregrate is a mathemaical certainty' Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Why not visit my Gallery.
::SR21
10/23/09 2:30 AM GMT
Just passing through and found another FAVE!! Well done! :) Steve
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::colocolor
06/12/10 3:36 AM GMT
Patti, this image is breathtaking. I love the way the water just blends into the sky, almost eliminating the horizon. The color is stunning, so bronze and alluring. Beautiful composition. Thanks for sharing. anne =D
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Critiquing art of any kind is utterly subjective. When I vote on your images, I look at several things. First, my initial gut reaction. Then, is it straight (if it should be); is the color correct or if intentionally saturated or desaturated, was it done properly and does it enhance the image; composition - if you intended a bulls-eye, unless it's an outstanding image that is really served by centering the subject, it'll get dinged; is the horizon dead center - again, unless there's an obvious reason that makes it a better photo, no points; is the subject interesting and uncluttered; is the image sharp; is the depth of field right for this composition, is there a catchlight in the creature's eye; would I hang this on my wall; is it an image I'd be proud to display; is it artistic or just a snapshot; does it move me; is there a message conveyed; is it documentary in nature and if so, does it tell the story in such a way it makes me want more. When I critique a photo in your gallery, I'm only suggesting what my subjective nature prefers. No need to defend your position if you like your image the way it is. If you give me constructive criticism on my pieces, I guarantee you I will take them to heart. I love to improve! Bring it on Caedians! Love, anne =D

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